F.3 Poem - Girls
Creative Writing    by Gervase Phinn

My story on Monday began:
Mountainous seas crashed on the cliffs,
And the desolate land grew wetter ...
The teacher wrote a little note: Remember the capital letter!

My poem on Tuesday began:
Red tongues of fire,
Licked higher and higher
From smoking Etna's top ...
The teacher wrote a little note: Where is your full stop?

My story on Wednesday began:
Through the lonely, pine-scented wood
There twists a hidden path ...
The teacher wrote a little note: Start a paragraph!

My poem on Thursday began:
The trembling child,
Eyes dark and wild,
Frozen midst the fighting ...
The teacher wrote a little note: Take care - untidy writing!

My story on Friday began:
The boxer bruised and bloody lay,
His eye half closed and swollen ...
The teacher wrote a little note: Use a semi-colon!

Next Monday my story will begin:
Once upon a time...

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